The Literacy Project- Curriculum/Activity Description

 

Date:  June 16, 2003

 

Submitted by:  Joe

 

Subject:  Writing

 

Level:  ASE

 

Brief Description: Sentence Combining, sentencing strategies, and grammar skills

Duration:  Variable

 

Materials Needed:  Attached: Enlightened Sentence Combining, 20th Century Plus Combining

Supplementary Materials:  Sentence Structure Quiz

 

Lesson Objective(s): 

Practice Sentence Combining Skills (Develop awareness of grammar and syntax rules)

Articulate language strategies

 

Lesson Procedure: Use these exercises (attached) as group activities, small group activities, or individual exercise (or some combination of all of these).  Parts can also be done as “homework”.  Prompt learners to identify the language strategies necessary for successful sentence combining.  (Those suggested are only a “beginning”).  Also prompt learners to explain how they know a certain sentence is “correct” or “complete.”  (You may have to talk about the dreaded “subjects and verbs”,

 

Assessment/Evaluation:   Their Sentences! . . . Student writing (sentence structure) . . .Their ability  to articulate strategies . . . their ability to "hear" the difference between awkward or un-parse-able constructions and more fluent constructions

 

Massachusetts ABE Curriculum Frameworks

Strands and Standards addressed:

English Language Arts: Awareness of rules for grammar & mechanics

 

Special Comments: There is research indicating that it is easier to connect advancements in writing skills with practicing “sentence combining” then it is to make the same association with “teaching grammar rules”.  It IS probably easier for learners to articulate simple language strategies (and even some more advanced than those indicated on these exercises: Enlightened Sentence Combining, 20th Century Plus Combining) than it is to correctly learn more abstract grammatical terms. Perhaps it is more useful too, at first.

 

These exercises are an outgrowth of a unit on the “History of Scientific Thinking,” specifically from group efforts to write short paragraphs about epochs in the history of Western Civilization.  The unit, itself, was an outgrowth from discussions about “Habits of Mind”.

 

The text for one of these exercises was taken from Mr. Dowling’s website and its page on the French Enlightenment http://www.mrdowling.com/705french.html (Thank you Mr. Dowling!)

 

Other Related Links and Resources:

http://webster.commnet.edu/grammar/combining_skills.htm

http://a4esl.org/q/h/vm/m-sco01.html

http://www.yale.edu/ynhti/curriculum/units/1981/4/81.04.06.x.html